添削体験記8: 英文添削でめげそうになる。『前置詞』『冠詞』

Subject: [ABC hotel] introduction of our service:

Dear Sales Manager,

Hello, my name is K Ideguchi, and I am a Sales Executive at the ABC Hotel in Osaka.I’m writing to you to ask for information on your product, the A machine. Before that, I’d like to introduce our company.Our hotel was built in 2010 in Osaka as the first ABC brand in Asia. ABC has more than 500 hotels chains worldwide and planning to open 20 more hotels by 2020. Since our opening, we have been a leader of the most luxurious hotels in West Japan.

Currently, we are interested in your product, the A machine, and service so would it be possible to request for a presentation in our office at the your earliest convenience? During the presentation, we’d like to discuss the things such as maintenance, product warranty, and date of delivery. If it’s possible, please let me know the available dates for the presentation. In the meantime, we would appreciate （スペルミスがありました）it if you can send the A machine‘ s product information to both myself and my supervisor Akiyoshi Iitsuka at our address indicated in our e-mail signature below.

We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,

K. I.

Sales Executive,

ABC Hotel

でも、直しが少ないから、ちょこっとなおして、すぐに提出すれば100点でしょう。

Lesson 5でまた頑張ります。!(^^)!