こんにちは、私が受講しているのは 「中級インテンシブ・プログラム」の全12回。ついに最後の課題が添削され返ってきました。
赤少ない！
最後の課題として、恥ずかしくない、訂正少なめの出来！
そういう意味で、自分に合格点あげちゃいます！合格です、がんばりました。
下は、各4項目についてのこれまでの成績表です。
| 1. Organization 文章構成 | Very elaborate and well put together. Good organization. | 5 / 5 |
| 2. Explanation and detail説明と詳細 | She took the time to itemize and discuss topics. | 5 / 5 |
| 3. Use of English 英語の使用 | There were problems with sentence structure. Usage of verb, prepositions, and capitalization need improving. | 3 / 5 |
| 4. Professionalism 専門性 | Wrong wording, or missed verbs need to be addressed. | 4 / 5 |
Subject: [ABC hotel] introduction of our services:Dear Mr. Customer,
Hello, my name is Kayo Ideguchi, and I am a Sales Executive at ABC Hotel in Osaka.
First of all, thank you for your inquiry regarding our hotel service. Today I am writing to you to introduce our hotel and services as you requested.
Our hotel was built in 2010 in Osaka as the first ABC brand in Asia. ABC has more than 500 hotels chains worldwide and planning to open 20 hotels by 2020. One of the major differences between ABC hotel and Grand hotel, which you have been considering as one of the options, is that we have 350 spacious rooms comparedwith to the Grand hotel that has only 230 rooms. We are also proud of having 22 Executive rooms including the access to the Executive Lounge on the 30th floor. We have 5 banquet rooms with the latest facilities such as a projector, screen, and audio equipment in comparison to Grand hotel that has 7 banquet rooms. Besides As well, we have 5 award-winning concierges who provide prominent service to our guests. On the other hand, Grand hotel has only 1 concierge. Our those These brilliant characters listed above are always the strong points for potential hotel users to make a decision. Thank you very much for holding having interests to in our hotel and we hope to serve you soon.
Hello, my name is Kayo Ideguchi, and I am a Sales Executive at ABC Hotel in Osaka.
First of all, thank you for your inquiry regarding our hotel service. Today I am writing to you to introduce our hotel and services as you requested.
Our hotel was built in 2010 in Osaka as the first ABC brand in Asia. ABC has more than 500 hotels chains worldwide and planning to open 20 hotels by 2020. One of the major differences between ABC hotel and Grand hotel, which you have been considering as one of the options, is that we have 350 spacious rooms compared
Please do not hesitate to contact us if you have any questions.
Best regards,
K. Ideguchi
Sales Executive,
ABC Hotel
私が中級インテンシブを修了するまで、このブログを読んでくださった皆様、ほんとうにありがとうございました。次のレッスンに進まなければならないのに、時間がないわけじゃないのに、なかなか取り組めないLazyな自分もいました・・・
でもなんとか、皆さんと同じように、課題を提出することが出来ました。学習システム使用中、様々な改善点や、良かった点なども見つかりました。
（改善点につきましては、社内共有しており、今後課題として議論していきます。）
まだ途中の受講中の皆さん、ゴール目指して頑張ってください！達成感はお約束します！！
さて、私は次、何を挑戦しましょうか。現在考え中です。再び、「難しい」や、「またやってしまった・・・」とぶつくさいいながらレポートしますので、是非覗きに来てくださいね。
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